On Saturday, May 4, 2019, I attended the Black Writers’ Guild meeting where Margaret Pagan presented a workshop titled “You Talkin’ to Me? Strategies for Effective Dialogue.” Ms. Pagan stated that dialogue is important for many reasons: 1) to learn about the setting and time period of a story, 2) to gain insight about the characters, and 3) to show tension and conflict. To illuminate these points, she had members from the audience read specific parts of Their Eyes Were Watching God by Zora Neal Hurston to show how masterful Zora was at using dialogue to conjure up images of her characters. The audience members had a blast reading their parts while the rest of us envisioned the setting and how the characters felt about each other. Next, we broke out in groups of four to read various parts of a short story titled “The Jockey” by Carson McCullers. This story had a lot of twists and turns. However, what I thoroughly enjoyed was how the writer used dialogue to show the intimacy, disl...
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