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Sunday, January 21, 2018

Do the Opposite and Win as a Writer! (Part 1)

I recently read a blog by Dawn Field titled "How to Fail as a Writer" and she listed 23 ways to do just that. While I'm sure there are more ways to fail, I wanted to talk about the first eight in Part I of my blog review of her list and why you should do the opposite to WIN as a writer.

Here goes:

1. Don’t worry too much about your opening line. Readers will soon be past it and into the good stuff.
My opposite: Please, please, please do worry about the opening line. Why? Because the first line of the first chapter determines whether readers will want to read the next paragraph or the next chapter of your novel. Once you get readers hooked they will want to read more of your work!

2. Don’t be concerned that your ending goes off with a fizzle. The rest of the book was worth the price of admission.
My opposite: Endings are a pain. I struggle with this too because if you have a story that sizzles and pops you don't want to be stuck wondering how to wrap things up. So I would suggest spending some time to write an ending that leaves readers gratified.

3. Don’t worry about typos and grammatical errors. Trivial details won’t bother veteran readers.
My opposite: Nothing turns readers off more than reading a novel with typos and grammatical errors. It's a sign that you don't care about yourself as a writer to polish your work and that readers don't matter. And please hire an editor and even when you do, please do your due diligence and read through your work again as there may be a few missed typos and grammatical errors.

4. Go with your first complete draft as your final draft. Your gut instincts were correct the first time around, you’ll just dilute them when you edit.
My opposite: A resounding NO. The first drafts are usually rushed to get the story completed. Once that's done then the real work begins to polish, polish, polish, or rewrite, rewrite, rewrite. I know rewriting may sometimes change the plotline but it's worth rewriting it to get the best product you can produce.

5. Only write when the urge hits you. If you need discipline to write, it’s not really writing.
My opposite: You should have a writing regime or else you fall into a place of no return. Trust me, I have been there and it's not a nice place to lift yourself out of. But, I'm trying to maintain a more balanced writing schedule.

6. Do not exercise, enjoy hobbies, or have any kind of life . Any minute spent not writing is time down the drain.
My opposite: Please exercise, enjoy hobbies, engage with friends and simply take care of yourself. I know if I didn't, I would be no good as a writer as these activities help feed my creative soul.

7. Sleep as little as possible. Sleep deprivation will unlock your inner writing god.
My opposite: Nothing rejuvenates me more than a good night's sleep. Listen to your body and get the necessary sleep as it's the best thing to replenish your mental acuity and to release your inner writing god.

8. Quit your day job immediately. Work gets in the way of your writing.
My opposite: Now this is laughable. Unless, you have a coffer of cash lying around, I would strongly suggest that you keep your day job. I know that work can sometimes get in the way but you have to carve out some time for your creative adventures. I do!

Thanks for reading. Stay tuned for Part 2 next week!






Sunday, January 14, 2018

Tips and Tricks for Writing Popular Fiction Novels

So you have a great idea for a fiction novel. Now, where do you start?

As for me, I started out by taking a few creative writing classes and throughout the years I continued to hone my skills through various workshops and attending writers conferences. I have also spent so reading a wide variety of books some within my genre (romantic suspense) and others outside my genre (non-fiction, etc.).

Anyway, I recently read the following John Grisham's suggestions for writing popular fiction and wanted to share them with aspiring writers. Also, this is a great reminder for me to see how I measured up against these suggestions.

1. Do write a page every day - Failed, but I'm working on that.

2. Don't write the first scene until you know the last - Semi-failed. I have a tendency to write and figure things out as I go along. But, I'm working on at least having a road map of where I want my stories to go.

3. Do write your one page at the same place and time - When I do write it's usually at the same place, but at different times.

4. Don't write a prologue - Passed with flying colors as I typically like to dive into writing my story. Also, I think prologues can be somewhat distracting.

5. Do use quotation marks with dialogue - Passed with flying colors as this is basic.

6. Don't keep a thesaurus within reaching distance - Sigh, it's right behind me on my book shelve, but I rarely use it. If necessary, I tend to jump online to http://www.dictionary.com

7. Do read each sentence at least 3 times in search of words to cut - Aaah, the proverbial killing your darlings. Over the years, I have done a better job of getting rid of words that slow down the pacing of my stories.

8. Don't introduce 20 characters in the first chapter - Passed with flying colors because as a writer I run the risk of not only confusing my readers but myself. So, I tend to limit the first chapter to no more than 2 or 3 of the main characters.



Sunday, January 7, 2018

Reflections of Things Past

Whew, now that the hustle and bustle of the holiday season are over, I'm now able to catch my breath and reflect back on 2017. For starters, 2017 was a year that pushed me artistically, personally and professionally.

Anyway, here are a few things I was definitely proud of myself for doing:

  • Hiring a publicist to revamp my website as it's been neglected for far too long and I love the new look! 
  • Freshening up the cover of my first novel, Gotta Let It Go, relaunching the second edition and making it available online at Amazon, Barnes & Noble, etc. 
  • Hiring an editor for the sequel, Gotta Get It Back - and yes this has been sitting for a few years. I'm shaking my head here because I'm guilty of not making this a priority amidst the craziness of life. But onward I go.
  • Changing my look (new hairstyle) which came with a new level of sassiness.
  • Diving into a new attitude about living, loving, and laughing out loud.
  • Embracing when folks do their own thing and being there to support them when needed without hesitation. 
  • Striking a balance between work and play and knowing I can't win them all.

Nevertheless, there were a few things that remained constant: 

  • Meeting with my monthly writers' group and enjoying the company of my fellow writers. We even incorporated having an icebreaker before our meetings. With only a few minutes to discuss a single question, we got to learn more about each other.
  • Loving and taking care of ME: gym time, spa time, alone time, and chill time with family and friends.
  • Reading and enjoying written words from some of my favorite authors and some new ones too.
  • Enjoying the arts - love, love, love the new productions of Baltimore Center Stage and yes I will truly miss Kwame Kwei-Armah. He did an excellent job!
  • Connecting with my readers via my monthly newsletter.
  • Networking with my fellow creatives online and in person. 
  • Being thankful for all the blessings bestowed upon me.
Toward the end of the year, I was given a blow by the loss of a good friend. This created yet another pause as to how I wanted to live my life in 2018. Moving forward, I promise to write more because he would have wanted me to, live my best life with no regrets, love unconditionally, embark on new horizons, and be happy above all else!

So, 2018 here I come!! #fearless #fierce #boundlessjourney







Monday, January 1, 2018

Interview with Daneace Jeffery, Author of Another Me

Author’s Bio: Daneace Terry Jeffery is a Baltimore-based children’s book author and a teacher who has taught for 19 years in Howard County, MD. Ms. Jeffery earned a B.A. in English and a M.S. in Literacy. She has five grandchildren who are all bi-racial. Another Me is the third book in the Ella series that is loosely based on the life of her eldest granddaughter.

What inspired you to write your book?
DJ: I was inspired to write the first book after the birth of my first bi-racial granddaughter. It was important to me to find books to add to her library that featured a bi-racial child. Unable to find the right book, I decided to publish my own. I was not looking for the “look I’m a bi-racial child” book, but just a regular picture book with the main character being bi-racial. 

Is there any particular author or book that influenced you in any way either growing up or as an adult?
DJ: Being a children’s book author was something totally out of my arena.  Growing up my influence surrounded authors like Nikki Giovanni, Richard Wright, Gwendolyn Brooks, Langston Hughes and believe it or not, Shakespeare and Chaucer.

Is this your first book? How long did it take to start and finish your book?
DJ: No, Ella and Her Bubbles was the first book and Grandma’s Two is the second book. Another Me is my third book.  It took about 3 months to write this third book, because I would write a few lines and put it away.

Do you write with an outline, or just let it flow organically?
DJ: Because these are picture books, I don’t use an outline, I take my inspiration from my grandchildren and their lives.

Do you listen to music when you write? If yes, is there a theme song for this book?
DJ: No, I don’t listen to music at all when I write, I need the peace and quiet to hear my thoughts.  My ideal surrounding to write is somewhere near water like a deserted beach or ocean. I love nature’s music.

What are the keys to success in getting your book out to the public?
DJ: My key to success is feet to the floor.  You have to be willing to put in the hard work of selling yourself in whatever manner you can.  I try to place myself in situations where I can be seen and heard with book in hand of course. And a good publicist is also another option.

What advice would you give to new authors?
DJ: The best advice I would give to new authors is to do your homework, know your weakness and be prepared for hard work that may not lead to success the first time around. Anyone can write a book, but will anyone buy that book?  If the market is already saturated with books about peanuts, you better have a new idea of what to do with those peanuts before you spend money to publish.

How about sharing an excerpt from Another Me?  
DJ: The baby is here and her name is Sophia. Today I am going to meet my baby sister at the hospital for the first time. I am very happy that I can play with her now and tell her all about the fun things we can do when she comes home. I hope she likes all of the stuffed animals and toys I left in her crib. When I get to the hospital and walk in the room Mommy is holding her. I just stop and stare. She is very small.

What’s next for you?
DJ: I plan on publishing books four and five in the Ella Book series, but first I am taking a detour to write a book based on the aftermath of the death of my nephew who was one of the sailors killed on the USS Fitzgerald this past June. This book will be about all of the various people and organizations that have held our family together in this time of national tragedy.

Where can readers find out more about you and your book(s)?
·         Website: www.ellabooks.weebly.com
·         Facebook: Ella and Her Bubbles
·         Twitter: @EllaBubbles

It’s been a pleasure having you here with us today. I know my readers will enjoy getting to know you and your work.